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Feel it closing in,
Feel it closing in, The fear of whom I call, Every time I call, I feel it closing in, I feel it closing in, Day in, day out, Day in, day out, Day in, day out, Day in, day out, Day in, day out, Day in, day out. I feel it closing in, As patterns seem to form. I feel it cold and warm. The shadows start to fall. I feel it closing in, I feel it closing in, Day in, day out, Day in, day out, Day in, day out, Day in, day out, Day in, day out. I'd have the world around, To see just whatever happens, Stood by the door alone, And then it's fade away. I see you fade away. Don't ever fade away. I need you here today. Don't ever fade away. Don't ever fade away. Don't ever fade away. Don't ever fade away. Fade away. Fade away. Fade away. Fade away. Fade away. Fade away. Fade away. Edit: Thanks for the DD, comments & Daily DeviationGiven 2009-08-29Joy Division - Digital by *ram0n3 "appears a mixture of surreal elements. There's a charge of energy and movement here that along with the two separated colours indicate some sort of battle between two forces of the human mind. Of course that is just one take on the visual. Interpretation is so individual. I like artwork that leaves me pondering the symbolism. In any case this is a refreshing and creative piece." (Suggested by `WilderWein77 and Featured by ^Destin8x) CommentsPos no me gusta mucho dar críticas sobre los trabajos de la gente, creo que cada uno plasma lo que siente de la mejor forma posible, y con lo que tengo que aprender aun no soy quien para dar críticas, al final diria nada mas que tonterias...
Aunque te voy a dar mi crit...digo opinión jejeje Vas por el mismo camino que nuestro amigo Mario... que es... el "no tengo ni pajorela idea de lo que quieres mostrarme" jajaja No en serio te veo cada vez mas centrado y con energias acumuladas para darlo todo (mmm creo que es el momento de retomar el proyecto lalalalala, ahora que estas a tutti). Me gusta el tratamiento de la luz como del color, las tecnicas usadas y el refinamiento de los elementos... me da un poco de grima la figura principal pero eso ya es cosa mia jusjusjus Asi es que nada... sigue así... que estás en racha... Lo de la grima supongo que será porque parece que se está desangrando por el muñón... aunque lo que quería era que diese la sensación de deshacerse el brazo desde la mano. Lo intenté bastante pero es lo más que me he podido acercar a lo que quería.
Lo del proyecto te juro que por ganas de hacerlo no será, lo malo es que no encuentro ni el momento ni el estilo. Nada más entrar a la empresa más grande del país, hace dos meses, estuve haciendo pruebas para buscar un estilo pero no me convencía nada. Y me jode bastante porque le tengo muchas ganas. A ver si pasa el verano y... hasta aquí puedo leer. -- [-Sorry for my english, es malo de cojones-] Great piece! Congrats on the DD!
Love the not-exact-symmetry. -- GALLERY | STOCK Journal Team Member of *DailyDeviants |
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The character ((who I'm going to assume is male)) looks as if he's trying to break free of a watery prison, but he can only do so if he feels positive. But, it looks like he might have to be condimned to his prison, for on the blue side, the town in the back ground looks as if it's being swallowed by the waters and on the red side, it looks as if the town is being consumned by a blaze of Hell fire. And the only salvation is the ladder in the middle, which is reaching to the heavens.
This captured my feelings in a very strange way. It looks like if the character doesn't feel good about himself, then he's not going to be able to get out of the water, and get a breath of air. So, there for, it looks like if he doesn't cheer up, then he will drown in eternal sorrow instead of fighting on with a passionate joy, swimming to try and reach the heavens.
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*xxShikaShanna4EverxX
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